Final Crit



-The theme is very clear in the final images

-Layout works really well – the ‘boxed’ images shown in a series create as narrative of people’s lives.

-Make sure it’s uniformed

-Don’t spread the images too far apart


Overall food feedback as I kept to my original idea and people got the meaning I was trying to show, which was documenting different lives and how similar/ different they can be. It was nice to see how the layout that I had chosen reflect on my meaning also, mirroring the chaotic life that is a youth.


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